Marlow Review / Edit review

Good suggestions still need an editor’s judgment.

Review three proposed edits to the Issue 42 feature. Accept the useful ones. Keep the original where the evidence stops.

Proposed edits

Each row is one suggested replacement, with the evidence it rests on.

3 suggestions · Revision 2

Proposed wording for the Issue 42 feature. Accepted rows replace the draft on the right; nothing is written to the story.
Edit	Wording	Evidence
Edit 01 Lead with the reader, not the deadline Ready for review	Original Everyone must file a draft before submissions close on 24 September. Proposed Send your draft by 24 September. A sketch is welcome; we read everything that arrives.	S2 · Contributor guide The contributor guide explicitly invites works-in-progress.
Edit 02 Name the confirmed issue date Ready for review	Original We’ll see you later this month. Proposed Issue 42 goes to the printer on 24 September. Contributors keep their byline.	S1 · Production calendar Replace an ambiguous date with the date in the production calendar.
Edit 03 Promise a follow-up recording Unsupported claim	Original We’ll collect written notes after the session. Proposed A recording will be available to everyone the following day.	No supporting source This suggestion is not supported by the selected sources. Keep the original unless a person confirms the promise.

Private working copy

Only accepted edits replace the original text.

Issue 42 · Feature

Everyone must file a draft before submissions close on 24 September.

We’ll see you later this month.

We’ll collect written notes after the session.

Review progress0 / 3

0 of 3 changes accepted. 3 still to review.

Preview only. The story document is never changed.

You’re the final editor

A confident sentence is not the same as a supported fact. One edit promises something the sources never mention.

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